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The Garden Inside by agnes-cecile The Garden Inside by agnes-cecile

acrylic on canvas
(80 x 120cm)



( the garden inside ) - NEW SOLO EXHIBITION
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Ah, good ol' 'Double Exposure', it is definitely nice to see a piece relating to this again in the popular recent. Especially since I am a personal fan of this style of artwork. Let's get to your proper critique anyway.

I gave your vision four stars, due solely to the factor that I can identify some very powerful underlay within this piece. I feel like you could improve on the visuals is by adding some more body language or bottom jaw expressionism to help portray the emotion within the piece better, for now I get a mixture of some saddening as well as neutral vibes from the piece, I feel like if you boost some more emotion into some more of your future double expressionism pieces, you could create a much more bigger vision as well as impact.

Originality is 3.5 stars, solely due to the factor double expressionism is often portrayed in flowers and nature based scenes so it is quite a common approach, but I can't disregard it entirely in the originality factor. It feels like your piece obtains some quite nice portraiture vibes regarding to other artists within that field, but adding the double exposure also gives the overall a quite unique appeal, despite it being a common concept.

I rated your technique at 4.5 stars, mostly because it looks like you are very talented in the regards of painting as well as painting in itself with acrylics, for some potential exploration if you choose to do so, I would recommend attempting to try some oil based paintings if possible. I feel like seeing your portraiture styled shading in paint within oil paints may come off as purely stunning. However, I would remember to take in accounts oils also take a long time to dry.

If you wish to continue in acrylic I feel like some addition of multi-medium may assist in the contrast of natural facial structure and the abnormal flower garden ahead. So maybe some forms of pens, collage material or saturation difference? Just giving some input ideals that I feel like you could experiment with.

Overall your impact is quite high at a 4.5 because it is something abnormal to the eye, and rather appealing with it's soft approach and almost-like melting effect through the image itself.

I do hope this critique helps you in some form of way or the suggestions are helpful to an extent. Keep up the good work, keep experimenting.
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Baronpotato Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Your works is beautiful!
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van1sh3d Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2017  Professional General Artist
beautiful.
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DannyKat7 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  New Deviant
Great work!!
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TanithLipsky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017
cool
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monmoshi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017
superbe !
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PutyatinaEkaterina Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016   Traditional Artist
 beautifulHeart 
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lsharte Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2016   Digital Artist
Excelente
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balaSempaii Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2016  Professional Interface Designer
Beautiful job
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Rayiky Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2016  Student General Artist
Lovely!
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HyperGurl4010 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2016
Dude, are you a bot?
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PapaMenjo Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
i really love this good job <3
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DrakesAbyss Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome
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achangelingchild Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
The florid imagery juxtaposed with the disturbed facial expression is quite jarring - I love it! 'The Garden Inside' indeed!
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Indigo-Moon-Shadow Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
The only word I can think of is, "Evocative." This surely evokes dozens of feelings and thoughts, but mostly mystery. It's like she's crying, or melting, but accepting it calmly. And that's such a beautiful concept. I also adore the color scheme. This is the sort of thing I'd actually hang on a wall :heart: 
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Zurku Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
Looks like she's about to cry, you should find another title, this one don't fit. the title is calm, the picture is disturbing. art is good +
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heromomo Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
interesting piece
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ScarletAlpha Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Student General Artist
amazing :heart:

love the style :hug:
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Tedimo Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Ah I love it
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wavelength121 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
This is wonderful.
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WillemFred Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Professional Photographer
Nice :) i like it

Do U shell it ?
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GamerWolfGaming Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
This is SO BEAUTIFUL!!!
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Fairytales-In-Black Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
Is SO beautiful! :heart:
I like the colours you chose, the flowers that cover her eyes and color rain,
Very beautiful! :) :heart: :heart:
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The-Last-Phantom Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
AWESOME!!!

MAXIMUM BORKDRIVE!

Sooo beautiful!!!
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Sceneteppe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Student General Artist
DAMN
This is great
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Opheliac98 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
Amazing work
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lilivia91 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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TheZeel Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
pretty
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enzouke Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016
this is beautiful ; _ ;
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Ururuty Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016
amazing
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nikolesilva Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016
How somber, but greatly emotional.
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GeorgeXVII Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016   Traditional Artist
Awesome technique agnes-cecile :clap:
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Nyanfood Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016   Digital Artist
The natural paint bleeds in the hair and the energy of the flowers work really well to make interesting textures. I love the use of triads/split complimentaries here, with the greens next to the purples and magentas.
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