Well to start off I see a woman dipping her head into water, she is on her knees and grasping he edge of the pool. I's fairly certain that your image did represent that quite well.
As for originality I've seen many people do this, but to be honest it didn't seem to have a story, unlike yours. She seems to be washing away something she regrets, the black bathing suit shows she's uncomfortable with who she is....maybe she wants to find a new realm to be herself. The colorful hair seems as if she struggles to keep herself together.
Your technique is fantastic (as usual) with the was you use the water colors and white pen in such simple ways it creates a image that people can't take their eyes away from!
Overall I would like to say I love your work and this piece shows how skilled you are to use so little for so much. Bravo.
this is soo beautiful,i like the colors and the darkness, love it ! i really love what you do, is simple but very realistic .i like your style and i see you work, like very stylish. i want to see more draws like that because you really enjoy that technique and in this case i enjoy look the water and the hair is more better than others. i hope you keep working on this and is your strong and keeo working with your clean lines and add more strong color i want to see that but i really love it keep with that your awesome and i really enojy looking !