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fuoriluogo 
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watercolor, acrylic and pen on watercolor moleskine notebook (200g)
40cm x 30cm





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:iconmeganmariebailey:
Ok, first off, this is really hard for me. I've been an admirer of your work for a while now on this account and my first one. As usual,I love your use of color. More so, you managed a strip of color and still kept the underlying structure intact. That's amazing. It really shows off your skill well.

Now the hard part. This is a strong piece, however, I couldn't help but notice that the eyes very large and the top pf the head was elongated. I don't have a problem with going outside of the box as far as anatomy to make things more interesting or improve the composition of the picture. However, I think the enlarged eyes and elongated cranium may be doing more harm than good. I feel like the focus should be on the colorful stripe in the middle of her face, but it gets distracted by the large eyes. eyes by themselves can be very magnetic and larger ones only increase the attention to that area. The elongated cranium may be just me, but when only that area is elongated, it also can take away from the main subject area.

Other than that, this is just wonderful. :3 As always, keep up the good work!
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This is going to be quite hard for me to critique since I love your art and its originality.

As always, you have a very unique style and I love your use of volume. The eyes are very captivating and yet I cannot determine the emotion behind this piece. It can be sad or even somber with the blank expression and white dripping on the shirt, and yet the color across the face throws me off. Is it to highlight the nose and mouth? Is it to bring attention to the sense of smell? It definitely makes one think when admiring this piece.
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:iconmissbelle590:
Missbelle590 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015  New Deviant Professional Traditional Artist
This is so original and beautiful man oh man you got talent.
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AnjaBas Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015
exceptional
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:iconcherrypainter:
CherryPainter Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
110 e lode! :D
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:iconartbyfieldsofsage:
artbyfieldsofsage Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There is something so intriguing about this ... the span of color across the canvas.
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:iconcricricracracrocro:
cricricracracrocro Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
nicex2
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:iconlilmisspeppy:
LilMissPeppy Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This reminds me of Carol.
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:iconwinnetherooh:
Winnetherooh Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful Job as always :)
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:iconzexxx13:
zexxx13 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Interface Designer
... nice one ... :)
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:iconlevesconte:
LEVESCONTE Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
the lines from the face, to frame the difference from the 'color stripe' to the face... they just don't seem right. They kind of seem like you threw them in at the end. I think I would have much prefered them in white instead of the grey. Mabye they are just the pencil lines? I do see that you are pushing the boundaries of your 'usual style', and I really do like the piece overall, but since you requested this critique, I thought I would just put my 2 cents in the comments. Love your work.
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nurul-nadia Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student
Hi Agnes Cecile. I'm Nadia. I just want to ask your permission to re-sketch your amazing paintings in my sketch book. Just to improve my skill. If you don't mind.
Hope you can reply me. Thank you :)
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:iconhoudashams:
HoudaShams Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Stunning work! 
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:iconappa-appa-away:
appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it. 
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:iconclair-lages:
Clair-Lages Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Just LOVE !! 
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:iconxxberrysxx:
XxberrysxX Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your work is so great. im really jealous 
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:iconmhmdson:
Mhmdson Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow ! pure talent 
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:iconfoolsightblind:
FoolSightBlind Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Love this
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:iconartsyvana:
ArtsyVana Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014   General Artist
Very nice
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:icondragon70:
dragon70 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Admirable trabajo Clap Hug 
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:iconkepidemic:
Kepidemic Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Filmographer
This is beautiful. The way you've placed the strip of colour over her face works really nicely~
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:iconms-wabbit:
ms-wabbit Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
0o0 thats awesome !!
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:iconhannzor:
hannzor Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is absolutely beautiful
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:iconesutickart:
EsutickArt Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Lovely!
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GenG123456789 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Love the concept! But I would like to see more detail :)
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:iconleilalilium:
leilalilium Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014   Traditional Artist
ιθ :heart:
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:iconyellowsmoke321:
yellowsmoke321 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
beauty
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:icontayskiyowl:
TayskiyOwl Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
stunninglyLove 
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:iconnahtahliah:
nahtahliah Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Favourite hairstyle :D right?
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:iconvoisb:
voisb Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yet another amazing piece! I could look at your art all day :'D
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:iconchamie13:
Chamie13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
beautifully done!
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:iconmaikeru01:
maikeru01 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow it looks fantastic. i don't think i'm really qualified to give you a legitimate critique. i love the eyes.
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:iconandreluizbarbosa:
AndreLuizBarbosa Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Incredible. Very creative and eye-catching
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:icontheforbidd3nfruit:
TheForbidd3nFruit Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Gorgeous as always!
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