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May 16, 2012
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS 500D
Shutter Speed
1/80 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
52 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
May 15, 2012, 7:12:30 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
Sensor Size
4mm
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ill-vision by agnes-cecile ill-vision by agnes-cecile


watercolor, ink and pen on paper
21cm x 29cm
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Also; I have no idea how to critique something like this. Especially considering that I'm quite certain this sort of work is currently well beyond my own capabilities. That being said; I'll try but I suggest to take it with a grain of salt. :)

I really appreciate the subtle expressions in it and that with the minimal type of shading you do, features are still easily defined and able to be 'read' as it were. It's looks fairly consistent in the direction the light comes from and even though most of the color comes from upper right area of the face, I don't find that it is what immediately draws my attention and eye. It doesn't detract or rather distract from seeing the face in its entirety and the picture as a whole.
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This is a beautiful piece of art work, and if you hadn't asked for a critique, I never would have looked close enough to find something 'wrong'. As it is, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it!! Here are my thoughts:

One eye being more colourful unbalances it, not in a bad way. It gives the picture more feeling than being symmetrical. The lips are done excellent, but they're so faint, they get completely lost within the rest of the picture. The faintness of them does add to the overall feeling though, so I wouldn't tell you to make them too much different.

The expression is excellent, you did an amazing job of showing emotions in this picture. Great work!
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KilljoyNeverDies Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Io me ne vado di testa con i tuoi disegni. Sono meravigliosi, davvero.
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KillerPonnie Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
This is perfect 
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iam-SHERLOCKED Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
featured! : [link]
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veronikaBIS Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
I love all your works so much! They're incredible!
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CharlieRosary Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fuck you're good!! Love how the face is so... incomplete, but still so colorful. Love how the watercolors flows. The look is also very skillfully painted. :)
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cebinc Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful, Beautiful!! :iconwowplz:
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Motstandsbevegelsen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
You are amazingly good with colours.
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trance108 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Your work is truly amazing. Absolutely inspiring.
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sentimento9 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
so amazing!
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AkiIsAwesome42 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Somehow, I'm not sure why . . . but the purple patch of color on the left eye looks kind of like a butterfly to me.

This is quite touching. It gives of a slightly somber serene vibe and I like that a lot.

Very thought-provoking . .. . :)
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