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ill-vision by agnes-cecile ill-vision by agnes-cecile


watercolor, ink and pen on paper
21cm x 29cm
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Also; I have no idea how to critique something like this. Especially considering that I'm quite certain this sort of work is currently well beyond my own capabilities. That being said; I'll try but I suggest to take it with a grain of salt. :)

I really appreciate the subtle expressions in it and that with the minimal type of shading you do, features are still easily defined and able to be 'read' as it were. It's looks fairly consistent in the direction the light comes from and even though most of the color comes from upper right area of the face, I don't find that it is what immediately draws my attention and eye. It doesn't detract or rather distract from seeing the face in its entirety and the picture as a whole.
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This is a beautiful piece of art work, and if you hadn't asked for a critique, I never would have looked close enough to find something 'wrong'. As it is, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it!! Here are my thoughts:

One eye being more colourful unbalances it, not in a bad way. It gives the picture more feeling than being symmetrical. The lips are done excellent, but they're so faint, they get completely lost within the rest of the picture. The faintness of them does add to the overall feeling though, so I wouldn't tell you to make them too much different.

The expression is excellent, you did an amazing job of showing emotions in this picture. Great work!
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KilljoyNeverDies Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Io me ne vado di testa con i tuoi disegni. Sono meravigliosi, davvero.
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KillerPonnie Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
This is perfect 
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iam-SHERLOCKED Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
featured! : [link]
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veronikaBIS Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
I love all your works so much! They're incredible!
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CharlieRosary Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fuck you're good!! Love how the face is so... incomplete, but still so colorful. Love how the watercolors flows. The look is also very skillfully painted. :)
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cebinc Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful, Beautiful!! :iconwowplz:
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Motstandsbevegelsen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
You are amazingly good with colours.
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:icontrance108:
trance108 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Your work is truly amazing. Absolutely inspiring.
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sentimento9 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
so amazing!
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AIA42 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Somehow, I'm not sure why . . . but the purple patch of color on the left eye looks kind of like a butterfly to me.

This is quite touching. It gives of a slightly somber serene vibe and I like that a lot.

Very thought-provoking . .. . :)
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Glitch-Facade Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
technicolor.
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FrozenWingsOfDeath Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
>.<
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Catkittenster Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am very impressed with your art, it’s stunning and very unique.
Kind regards
Gerde
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Sotze Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Amo il tuo stile davvero fantastici lavori tutti
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bodhi-doctrine Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
this is a very striking piece, without it being overkill .... my one suggestion is that the upper lip should have a darker tone than the bottom lip
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KZ-Intelligent Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
really like
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:iconderwalzer:
DerWalzer Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
it is perfect! the eyes speak to me.
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Leonetta96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome!! love :3
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dveronikha Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
brilliant
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DreamsOfAPessimist Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gosh I could stare at your art forever
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kallu-wah Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome !:aww:
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VeroFalcioniArt Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fantastico! :) Mi piace tanto come riesci a fare un colore quasi caramellato.
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Torynce Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So beautiful!
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SpeakersBlown Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your use of watercolors to create shapes is beautiful!
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artsy-angel Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
the expression of the eyes is so interesting, its great :D
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SusaLaa Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
yet another beautiful piece! you're a real master to draw/paint eyes! love it!
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axcy Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Love your work!
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kartiksharma Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Very neat!
I really like it! ♥ :)
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You always give the most interesting paintings. Great work once more!
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bananamal1714 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
beautiful, and sad. I actually looked at it for a very long time. Thank you.
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iHootie Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Gawd, this is so amazing..
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tinfoil-rinjii Featured By Owner May 17, 2012   Traditional Artist
I love the blue, yellow and purple together, it looks so lovely! :)
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artspitfire Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awesomeeeee *-*
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yukinukkola Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Soft and beautiful, really.
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casie Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
very nice.
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jazziturelove Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
i love this kind of work wonderful love it
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A-Flower-Child Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student Artist
Lovely
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RachelDS Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student General Artist
This is beautiful :) I love the colors and the placement of the paint, and I like that they eyes are looking to the side. The nose is so well done too!! I have a hard time with noses lol
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Mymagic1212 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
almost scary and always mysterious <3 a true work of art :3
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Erzahlung Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Gorgeous **
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Slipmaskin Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool!
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harlequin-hannah Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student General Artist
These type of paintings seem to be popping up a lot lately xD But this is certainly ine of the best I've seen :)
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The-Rainbow-Artist Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful! May I use this in an article I'm writing? Please?
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semituf1 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very cool no over-anayizing straight up art for arts sake your own unique creation well done.
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PrincessPyon Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
this looks amazing i love this =v=
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petlanka Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Soo very good and originaly :)
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DARKNESSZT Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This piece is what called me to your work. I couldn't decide whether to fave it or not, but I am.

I'm doing it just because it helped me find the rest of your work and it is beautiful.
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KyouKaraa Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome!
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rizbaloch Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
sad, staring & suffering ... this is meaningful & i like it !!!
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schzimmyDearr Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
WOW AWESOME!
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