I like the minimalist approach to the canvas, secluding the image to the center and not venturing out to the edges, because to be fair it doesnt need it. The impact is there and to me it sort of looks like it could be a layout for a horror movie poster, I adore the shards expelling from the main structure, I think it adds greatly to finished article. I absolutely love the skin tone and how the deep color defines the eyes, because after all the eyes are what leap out from this piece and I for one truly enjoy this piece based on the eyes alone. Everything is a bonus and adds to the effect of the whole piece.
The artwork is good, and i love the theme of it. The only real thing i see wrong is the eye on the right. You are showing to much of it. The coloring is good but the dept in some places are a little off, making the picture a little off balance. Also were is the light source coming from the left? it looks a little to unclear but i do like the effect you did on the left eye. (sorry for spelling errors) Over all this picture is really good even tho i think you could have made it bigger and more understanding.
The longing in the eyes speaks to the need in the artists mind for some sort of salvation, a relief long over due, the portrayal of the human condition is quite evident and deserves much praise. kudos. keep up.