Lovely work. Whether it was your intention or not to convey the eyes as both being open and closed is uncertain but that's what I initially saw. The fading of the eyes, which is usually the prominent feature in a portrait, holds you in a subtle pull. While the expression behind the dying gaze appears to be looking at something, knowingly for the last time. The fractured colors, somber, speckled and dripping down suggest that the color of life, the vivacity of sight is falling away; and soon the page, like the fading eyes, will be blank. Lovely but fleeting, like beauty itself.
This is absolutely beautiful and way better than i could ever do, but it leaves me wanting a little more detail in the eyes. That would have been perfection for me.
I feel like this some times, looking through new eyes at a world I can't quite believe.
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You don't change the way people think by changing what they say. You change the way people think with HEADLESS CHARRED BODIES FLYING THROUGH THE AIR. BLOOD! FLAMES! HELLFIRE AND DAMNATION! -- Alastair J. R. Young
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