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October 8, 2013
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on the jetty, in the sun, her mind was elsewhere by agnes-cecile on the jetty, in the sun, her mind was elsewhere by agnes-cecile

Original photo by Lorenzo Marotti

watercolor, ink, acrylic and pen on watercolor moleskine notebook (200g)
30cm x 40cm

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I watch long enough for your creativity , though I myself am not an artist professionally , but even I can see that you really have a very high quality and excellent performance. You have invested in them all his soul , and it shows. You know , even despite the fact that I was given the highest rating of your film she deserves better . I do not just want to be your fan , I just know all your sincerity, then all that is hidden in your soul. But why are they all sad , melancholic , but it is your right . If you like to paint so you have to draw it . I want you to be happy , because you deserve it . Many people find it in your drawings a part of himself . Continue to please others with your creativity. You are a big fellow.

I'm sorry for bad English.
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This is one of those cases where I really have to dig to find a flaw in the work. It's pretty much a solid composition with a very fresh angle, and great use of color and negative space. The only thing I notice in this stunning portrait is that the character's left arm seems to be disproportionate. It seems the shoulder is higher on the body. The fact that the head is turned over it blocks some of the view, but it does seem like the shoulders are at unnaturally different heights. If that is fixed then I wouldn't have anything else changed at all!
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trihogaster Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
your works are amazing :)
Fantasygames13 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Interesting, very well done! 
beastvamp Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the placement and "open" space. 
Asanjana Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Good one..I like your minimalism!You just know when is time to stop +fav 
Ivi-Green Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lovely colours!
Agyness01 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Latitudezero Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Sometimes it's interesting to see what happens when you ditch the rule of thirds.  Some people will complain about too much negative space being used here,just because the painting isn't focused on the woman. 

CobNation Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
god damn i love your work!!!!! 
daniestrydom Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
You are so talented !
MarinaGurgel Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
That is perfect!
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