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on the jetty, in the sun, her mind was elsewhere by agnes-cecile on the jetty, in the sun, her mind was elsewhere by agnes-cecile



Original photo by Lorenzo Marotti






watercolor, ink, acrylic and pen on watercolor moleskine notebook (200g)
30cm x 40cm



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I watch long enough for your creativity , though I myself am not an artist professionally , but even I can see that you really have a very high quality and excellent performance. You have invested in them all his soul , and it shows. You know , even despite the fact that I was given the highest rating of your film she deserves better . I do not just want to be your fan , I just know all your sincerity, then all that is hidden in your soul. But why are they all sad , melancholic , but it is your right . If you like to paint so you have to draw it . I want you to be happy , because you deserve it . Many people find it in your drawings a part of himself . Continue to please others with your creativity. You are a big fellow.

I'm sorry for bad English.
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This is one of those cases where I really have to dig to find a flaw in the work. It's pretty much a solid composition with a very fresh angle, and great use of color and negative space. The only thing I notice in this stunning portrait is that the character's left arm seems to be disproportionate. It seems the shoulder is higher on the body. The fact that the head is turned over it blocks some of the view, but it does seem like the shoulders are at unnaturally different heights. If that is fixed then I wouldn't have anything else changed at all!
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:icontheobserved:
TheObserved Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
I love the off-center simplicity this has
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d2mode2 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015
Love the contrast between the water and the jetty, can almost feel the sun burning the back of my neck as I look down at the lady.
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:icontrihogaster:
trihogaster Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
your works are amazing :)
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:iconfantasygames13:
Fantasygames13 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Interesting, very well done! 
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:iconbeastvamp:
beastvamp Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the placement and "open" space. 
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:iconasanjana:
Asanjana Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Good one..I like your minimalism!You just know when is time to stop +fav 
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:iconivi-green:
Ivi-Green Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely colours!
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:iconagyness01:
Agyness01 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Adorable!
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:iconlatitudezero:
Latitudezero Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Sometimes it's interesting to see what happens when you ditch the rule of thirds.  Some people will complain about too much negative space being used here,just because the painting isn't focused on the woman. 


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CobNation Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
god damn i love your work!!!!! 
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:icondaniestrydom:
daniestrydom Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
You are so talented !
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:iconmarinagurgel:
MarinaGurgel Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
That is perfect!
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:iconraposa7:
RaPoSa7 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
What is brand of your watercolor? Sorry for asking^^
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:iconxdbakaxd:
XDbakaXD Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Perf!
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:iconkyle-culver:
kyle-culver Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Brilliant, subtle, beautiful.
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:iconmikeylani:
mikeylani Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
<font><font class="goog-text-highlight">*-* es su paz, su escape, ante la inmensidad del mar y la grandeza del universo... la suavidad de los colores transmiten esa sensación de armonía necesaria en una adolescente... las estrellas reflejadas sobre el agua  son donde quieres llegar...  esa libertad y seguridad que se quiere obtener .... ese día de paz después de correr y correr y al fin legar allí ante toda esa creación tan hermosa..... es muy atrayente e identifica a muchos jóvenes, su diario vivir sus anhelos sus problemas..... una Gran pieza De Arte!!  pintas hermoso agnes !!</font></font>
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SaffyOtter Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student
For a moment, I thought she was lying on a giant, rainbow xylophone, and I just thought that was a cool concept.
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:iconmousykat:
mousykat Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
oh love this! it's amazing!
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:icontheorangeelephant:
TheOrangeElephant Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist
dreamy. i know the feeling well
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:iconstrokeswithpencil:
StrokesWithPencil Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist
Beautiful job on this. :iconmnrthumbsupplz: 
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archirsn Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a truly stunning piece , but what I would like to commend you upon is your relentless pursuit of growth. You already had a very distinct and powerful style as it is with the black and white acrylic pieces and the watercolor portraits with a intriguing combination of surrealism and abstract. I've adored all that work so much and it has inspired a whole new trend among so many artists. But you've been experimenting so much lately with the backgrounds (like this one) , style and expression. The need to experiment and try something new is what I admire that most about artists, be it musicians, performing artists or artists.
Every-time I see something new from you, its an exhilarating punch to the system. I hope this comment doesn't come off as creepy or an unnecessary-nosy opinion.
Anyway, All the best and keep surprising us. :)
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:iconinmortal-memories:
Inmortal-memories Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
its amazing
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:iconumbravita:
Umbravita Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow, you're amazing with water colours. I love the rainbow colours at the top, and how they gradually transition to brown. That's really original.
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:iconlllrares0ullll:
lllRaRes0uLlll Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist
this looks new from your usual style and I'm loving it! so pretty! <333 great job!
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:icontiovi:
Tiovi Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Congratulations, I love your work.
Know their illustrations over a year and I'm completely in love with all of them.
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:icontonksftmemories:
TonksftMemories Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
so beautiful!
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:iconkirschpraline:
Kirschpraline Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist
Awesome work and beautiful colors, well done! 
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:iconhectormcreyes:
HectorMcreyes Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing
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:iconannaliese-shelly:
Annaliese-Shelly Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
Looks beautiful!
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dholms Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i just love the whole feeling i get from this.
carefree.
end of summer.
wistful.
daydreaming.
or maybe night dreaming.
i know a great song for it too.
REMs nightswimming.
or something like that.

very nice.
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:iconodamargrethe:
odamargrethe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is just beautiful. Well done. You are my idol! 
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dragon70 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Muy bonitoClap Hug 
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:icongostelmilky:
GostelMilky Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Professional Photographer
This is amazing~
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:iconchelseahantken:
ChelseaHantken Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I saw this on the front page of S6 - beautiful work!
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:iconpapermtns:
PaperMtns Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
The way you use color is unique, i love it
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:iconleon5115:
leon5115 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I would want this to take a whole wall of my living room... amazing art
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:iconalmerious:
Almerious Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Love all the colours!
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SoapManpv Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love the contrast!
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:icondiszney:
Diszney Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
W-o-w, I've been following your art for a while but this piece in particular just sticks out and screams at me. I'd love to buy a massive print of this and let it be the only piece of art in one giant room. I absolutely LOVE this one, the colors are magnificent and just work together to really leave an impression on you.
Just love this. No other words.
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:iconcannydanny:
cannydanny Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lovely!
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:icon15t:
15t Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
very cool, nice work!
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:iconleongeds:
Leongeds Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wonderful.
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:iconchemie-chan:
Chemie-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really good! Love the colors, could use a bit more shadows in the face but the are'nt any at the photo so it's tricky.
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:iconmaribay:
Maribay Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
You're work is just wonderful, i prefer you'redraing than the photo (which is beautiful too)
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:icondoressza:
Doressza Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Ohhh i love it!
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:iconannaarts:
annaarts Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
τελειο!

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:iconevilblea:
Evilblea Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Simply amazing!
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:iconruna-amanda:
Runa-Amanda Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, this is quite different from your usual paintings, but I like it! :)
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LeftAlive Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love how the colour around her is so vibrant as the it pans down the colour fades back to reality, Silvia I decided to go to Europe will you be having and gallerys or meet and greets would love to see your work in person.
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Victoria-Von-Blood Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Not only did I learn a new word today, I also saw a lovely painting/mixed media art piece! :iconheartiesplz:
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