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Submitted: April 24, 2012
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Date Taken:Apr 24, 2012, 10:13:56 PM
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the result of the first day of workshop, it was really nice painting with a lot of other young painters thank you guys!

watercolor and pen on watercolor paper
45cmx30cm}

Critique by ~Mossdeep1800 Jul 7, 2012, 8:17:44 PM

First off, I would like to say that this picture is beautiful. The colors in itself gives me the first impression. It gives a soft playfulness side, while the face makes it more serious, and having those things combined really makes a very beautiful happy medium. I love looking at this, and seeing the paint's mixture of colors. And, looking into those eyes, I feel like they have a whole story behind them, and it really intrigues me. You have done a fabulous job on this. kudos to you.
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EEEK! This was my first critique!
Hope I did it correctly!

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Critique by ~keepcalmandsparkle91 Jun 27, 2012, 3:33:48 PM

I really like all of your Watercolor paintings. The Colors you use are beautiful and i gave you full points for the perfect technique, its awsome considering how hard it is to handle watercolor.
Vision: its just very nice to look at, as i said the colors and all. The way you draw the eyes in so much detail and the rest more watercolor-like, its amazing
Originality: the things you did around the faces (not just in this piece) are original, but i gave some minus points because of the color which runs down the painting. personally i just think thats a little overused.
Impact: Sorry but just two Stars. Its just my opinion, but i have the constant feeling in almost all your Watercolor paintings, that it misses something. The faces are too plain, in an emotional way. They lack of expression and dynamic.
The way you paint is very expressiv thought, but the faces arent, at least thats my opinion. The faces are all very good drawn, as i said, your technique is flawless, but the emotions just don't reach me. How can i say it, it doesn't touch me?

Sorry about my bad english, and no I couldn't paint it better, but that doesn't mean that i can't express what feels right and wrong for me in a picture, so i hope you don't feel offended. Your art is still very beautiful! And its just my opinion, who i am to critique you, right?