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pen, watercolor and acrylic on watercolor moleskine notebook (200g)
30cm x 40cm



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:iconhadasaugh:
I'm certainly no expert and I love all of your work. The use of the fine lines with the splotches and drips has always fascinated me, and that is what I like with this particular piece - the energy.

However, there is one thing that draws my eye away from the central focus, and it appears to be an imbalance of the back of the head - as if there needs to be more hair there to balance the entire picture to itself.

There is another thing that I'm feeling with this particular painting and the last few that you've been working on. I get the sense that you are struggling to find a new direction or looking for more inspiration in your existing style...but that's just my impression based on what I've seen. Just a thought.
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I love your work and your paintings are really inspirational.
I'm no one, an this is the first time that i have to express an opinion about someone's work, but i'll try.

I think that your technique is really stunning, all your subjects looks like they're melting in the thin air, with a colour teardrop.
Your paintings look like they are vanishing, you've to look at them really fast, before they will disappear.
In this one the girl seems like is looking toward the infinite, waiting for something.
It's a mine opinion but there is something that troubling me about the position of nose and the rigth eye. I don't know why but they seems like they're pushed against the canvas.
I hope that my modest critique will be usefull for you. I Love your art.
Sincerely, Nicola.
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123prova123 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Professional General Artist
Non č tra i tuoi disegni migliori, e queste macchie di colore, non riesco ancora a capire se mi convincono o meno, perņ questo tratteggio, e questo nuovo modo di fare la base del disegno lo trovo molto interessante, dovresti farne altri con questo stile, per quanto mi riguarda sono molto belli! =)
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CosmosMoon1308 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
WOW IS FABULOUS
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escume Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013   Digital Artist
I always love seeing your pieces!
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JNCHTH Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student
feel good picture ,i like it! Meow :3
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CosmosMoon1308 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome :0
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AndrewGress Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
looks great, maybe some darker blue/purple added to make the viewers eyes keep moving around the piece?
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anagonzalezleiva Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I love your work....bravo!!!
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didadi48 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hey, I watched all your videos in youtube, really great work :) bravo!!!
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Moelolitacathey Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your work are always so beautiful
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yellowhuman Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice Mix!
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rociodiestra Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like what you decided to paint as much as what you decided not to paint. Knowing what's necessary and what leave to the imagination is a great talent of yours. I'm moving to Italy in a week and I can't wait to see your paintings live!
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johngiannis27 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
feutured fav.me/d6ogo87 :)
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:iconryph:
Ryph Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   General Artist
I find this rather sweet, the sort of dreamy expression on the girl and the explosion of yellow just made me think of sunflowers in a strong breeze.
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great work. 
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:iconmina12310:
mina12310 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student General Artist
So pretty
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15t Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I agree with hadasaugh but instead of hair I would say a nurse hat for some reason I can see one on this painting but that is just my thoughts but I like it and I love your work!
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silkytatsink Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
beautiful work, watercolor is such a difficult medium for me
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chasingbanaghan Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
I love the contrast between watercolor & pen in this piece -- it adds depth and texture
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skeel76 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
It seems to me that her nose is pushed further to the left of the frame, while her mouth appears to be more towards the viewer.  I get the same feeling with her eyes, the far eye looks to be staring straight ahead while the eye closest to us seems to stray more, and looks far more relaxed.  Love the rendering and the flow of the hair, though I think it might have gotten too heavy between the shoulder and the neck... that dark patch of hatching is almost distracting from the rest of the piece.  

Cool stuff.
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BERBBR Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
amazing
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Horo-tuturuu Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Omg, very nice... congratulations (:
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jessmia Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I also agree with LeftAlive, this piece is AMAZING!
Your one of my fav inspirations for watercolor, you're the whole reason I started doing it
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LeftAlive Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You have changed my view of colour, colour isnt something you add to make things look real or further and closer. Colour is power connect with emotion, connected to that person. Thank you Silvia.

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MarlenNaessEriksen Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing! I love your unique style, you are truly a talented artists. I especially like the hair in this one.

I listed you on my website under "Artists I admire", I hope you don't mind! marlennaesseriksen.wordpress.c…
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ArtsyVana Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   General Artist
Very
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