Every aspect of this painting is superb. The face of the girl is absolutely incredible. The facial features are perfectly rendered, and the expression on her face is captivating. The coloration is interesting, the color harmony is great and the technique is terrific. I like that the sharpest detail is in the face, and then the detail softens outward. The greatest amount of detail is in the one exposed eye making it stand out thereby watching the watcher. To me this painting is extremely successful in every way. The concept of this painting is amazing. The idea of visualizing the transformation of thought is unique enough, but you have accomplished it. I think you created an amazing work of art.
I love the way you have added expression and feeling to this piece on the girl's face and body language, she looks sort of anxious/fearful yet curious. I think you've slightly ventured from your regular style in this painting (by adding more depth and form to the people) which is a definite improvement in my opinion. This is one of my favourite paintings you have done for this reason. You should check out this artist called James Jean, although his technique isn't the same as yours, he seems to have the same goal and you could definately find inspiration from him, here is one of his works [link] Sorry for digressing from your work I just felt like you would this artist!
These pink triangle things look useless on this picture, I don't like them. I love the face of that girl and her emotion, she looks beautiful, and that's why I'll give you a fav. ^^
my thoughts on the triangles....."metastasis" is a word that most usually is connected to cancer. As I look at the triangles, I see the tiny malignant cells multiplying, spreading. They can't be seen, but they are felt...with every once of emotion in the heart and soul of the one providing a home for those cells . Always present....in the foreground of that person's thoughts. And somewhere inside, there just might be that tiny group of cells that can't be fought, no matter how hard the body tries....and creates the solid triangle (right side) that becomes REAL. Too real. Too real to go unnoticed. That's what I instantly saw in the painting when I read the title. Also, someone once told me that as soon as an artist shares her work, her title of that piece is only hers. In sharing, she have given "away", so to speak, the rights to that title. Everyone who views, studies and is affected by a particular piece of art, will have their own personal interpretation of what it means to them, what they see and feel, therefore will give the piece their very own title.
You should check out this artist called James Jean, although his technique isn't the same as yours, he seems to have the same goal and you could definately find inspiration from him, here is one of his works [link]
Sorry for digressing from your work I just felt like you would this artist!
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