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waiting place by agnes-cecile waiting place by agnes-cecile

this waiting room will be always my place

watercolor and acrylic on watercolor moleskine notebook (200g)
30cm x 40cm

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Critique by ArtisticalxOni Oct 31, 2013, 9:23:12 AM
I think this is a beautiful art piece. Your style is very different and outlandish that it makes this picture what it is. It's like if this was not the way it is it probably wouldn't appeal to people as much but it's amazing. I think you have incredible potential and don't stop doing what you do. By the way I also like the pinks, blues, and purples you use. Your color pallet is very vibrant and original. You make what you do seem extremely easy. That's what I like about this piece. It's very interesting and I'd love to see more.
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I absolutely love her hair and face, especially the mixing of those colors. I also love the contrast between the techniques between him and her; they both have a very unique and individual feel. It is very well done but the rest of the piece feels, to me, unfinished.

One thing that irks me about is the placement and solidity of her arm. You form images and lines through the color and impressions you leave behind which, except her head and bit of him, is lacking. It makes me want to better angle her arms to see his face, even if it's a very un-detailed and blurred face. Then finish coloring in her arm.

Overall, nice, but black and white line doesn't fit for this. Maybe if you cropped it to center in on her but that arm bugs me and really takes away from the piece with how distracting it is.
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David-Michaels Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Professional Filmographer
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Fernezco Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014
Great work! love the impression!
Heart-Scream-Color Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
After reading the one critique by Kamishawe, I just wanted to comment that I love how you placed her arm here. I think it adds a nice design element to the painting; it's separate from the white of the background and works well with the blackness of their clothing (which i also enjoy the big and flat black design of their bodies because it emphasizes the color and detail above). The way that her arm hides his faces adds to the overall impact rather takes away from it, in my opinion. I really love how his profile just peeks out past the bottom of her arm. Don't know how to better express myself; I don't usually comment, but I felt compelled to do so here.
yindongi9008 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Painting to the deep I love you, I am a Chinese student is very want to make friends with you to learn from you, if you want to back to the my email?
mytacis Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
There is such emotion in this picture, I can find myself relating to it. I love how the black stands in contrast to the otherwise light, pastel like color palette. And their poses and composition is just beautiful.
JeremyCombot Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Very poetic and the watercolors are cery well used, beautiful work ! Really love it.
Jalal-El-Tabeey Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd like to fave all of your artworks , Silvia !
ApocalypseToad Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
Ive fallen in love with this
Arahiriel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
A very interesting and powerful piece. I love how his head is not really visible, which makes this picture a little bit surreal at the first glance.
gangreengirl Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lovely <3
DeathNoteMyselfeLost Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your art is awesome! I love it!! To me your paintings allways seem to say something.
NinjAPixiEX3 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love how she looks sick and he's just holding onto her. 
VeeVM Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist
totally perfect Heart 
xXHazelShadowsxX Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Witchouse Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
TwizzyMonster Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
One of my all time favorites on this site, This it the kind of art I hope to be ale to recreate one day. 
le-chat-fou Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I do not agree with the critiques... Everything is at the right place, the "awkward" position of the head or the flatness of the arm make it even more beautiful.
corruptTessa Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
The only one thing I don't really like is that you should have chosen a bigger paper size. And that's all.
I like that flat cutted-from-paper girl's  hand.
charlotterae Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
Favourited because the hair is just so beautiful.
Vargpest Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
I really like your art, I keep coming back here.
szymon-mag Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
keep watching this particular painting for a few days now. there is something very strong in it, can't turn my eyes away. thank you for this piece of art.
Babylonia666 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Professional
twistedmentality Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Professional General Artist
i love this. the colors and contrast are great. her expression tells it all.
PremiumandGold Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<P&G> one word......."WOW" Woohooooo! 
Ashleighrobertss Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My new wallpaper, I actually love this so much
Kim-Key Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful !!!
TormentaSolar Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Hi, I was wondering if you are planning to make it printable, I would love that. Thanks!
Caliphos Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's interesting to see it up close as the thumbnail view obscures the person's head and makes it look like the girl is just cradling her legs in her dress.
mrtyamiro Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student Interface Designer
L1993 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Owlandthebat Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student General Artist
This has to be my favorite piece of yours. It's emotional and surreal and speaks volumes with out needing a word. It looks like she just let out a deep breathe of longing, or sadness, or just complete void. I'm probably not explaining this correctly but I guess that isn't a terrible thing. This painting is so much more than a still picture, it breathes and had emotions and speaks volumes.
Adharan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Nice construction and expression, really communicative! 
AliceRose Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
so emotive, that I nearly can't breathe
alicexz Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Totally awesome :)
mirenne Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the contrast of the black and bright blue/purple. It also looks amazing how you just didn't coloured her arm. It's such a nice piece of art :O!
CanvasBunne Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Artist
That is cool, I didnt even see him excellent composition. :D
ApprovingAbnormality Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're great, it's so impressive, so beautiful.
pentsu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013   General Artist
Love the colors!
anabelalima98 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Writer
Beautiful, i have just seen your other pieces, and i must say that with all honesty, you are one talented indivual, a very well done!  
yellowsmoke321 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ArtGoldArt Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love it!
InvictusAether Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
you are just amazing

bolsterstone Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013   General Artist
Nice painting - not entirely sure how it is surreal though...
Cattersnaz Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am really liking your use of black at the moment
dragon70 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ExcelenteClap Hug 
otherdruid Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful! :heart:
NdrN Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
Jacqueson Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student Filmographer
Oh my God. The title and the actual painting, when taken together are just, holy shit. I feel you.
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